1 [Report This]Date: February 23, 2022 05:04 am Title: The touch on a patch of skin
I read your story with a smile on my face. I loved it!!
1 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2021 01:16 pm Title: The touch on a patch of skin
Oh this was just exquisite! The descriptions were so break and I felt so swept up by their emotions. Wonderful job!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! It's been a while since I wrote this. I'm glad you liked it.
1 [Report This]Date: January 13, 2019 10:28 am Title: The touch on a patch of skin
Awwww :( are you sure this is the end? I really loved this story. Hate to see it end. Maybe an epilogue?
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm thinking about it. I'm definitely not ready to leave these two alone.
1 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2019 09:08 pm Title: The touch on a patch of skin
Love this. Especially Pam's emphasis on textures, which I think really fits both with her character and what you're trying to do here. Lovely.
Author's Response: Glad you noticed! :)
1 [Report This]Date: January 11, 2019 07:27 pm Title: The touch on a patch of skin
Oh no that can't be the end! Please give us more!
Author's Response: An epilogue? I'm thinking it :)
Date: January 11, 2019 05:23 pm Title: The touch on a patch of skin
Good chapter here. Lots of good internal thoughts and then that scene in the kitchen while she and Jim are figuring things out was very well written. Just the right touch of being nervous yet tinged with hope. That they're both on the same page about their feelings is sweet to see. Pam being cautious about jumping from one relationship to another so quickly seems very realistic.
Be careful with proofreading. There was one time where the word in the chapter was "zinc" when I'm sure you meant "sink." Since "zinc" is spelled correctly I'm sure your spellcheck didn't catch it. A trick I'll do is when I get done writing a chapter, I'll leave it alone for about a day and then go back and proofread. I've caught a lot of typo type errors like that before. Just a suggestion is all.
Author's Response: Thanks for pointing that out. Turns out, I'd copied the wrong file. I think it's better now.